You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words
The line chart illustrates the number of enquiries that a Tourist Information Office has received in a particular city from January to June in the year 2011. Overall, we can see a steady increase in the enquiries made in person and a gradual decrease in the email and letter enquiries from Jan to June. The enquiries made by telephone had fluctuated a bit till March and then saw a steady increase from April.
We can almost see no difference in the number of enquiries made by telephone in the months of March and April. There were exactly 1000 enquiries by phone in those two months. Though in January, the least number of enquiries were done in person, the same personal enquiries have topped the list by the end of June, it being over 1800 in count. People have gradually retained themselves from using letters and emails as mediums of enquiry by June. June saw only 400 enquiries through Letters/emails. In February, the number of enquiries made by the three mediums has a difference of only 100 each, 600 in person, 700 by letters and 800 by telephone. The number of enquiries has reached the highest in June almost around 4000 among which personal enquiries were the highest in number whereas enquiries by letter were the lowest.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 764, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: highest
...among which personal enquiries were the highest in number whereas enquiries by letter were the lo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1024.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 216.0 196.424390244 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74074074074 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57240820062 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.49537037037 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 319.5 283.868780488 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.995609521 43.030603864 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.4 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.1 5.23603664747 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149396354483 0.215688989381 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0713034224034 0.103423049105 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0652785995771 0.0843802449381 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129731229804 0.15604864568 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.02037960965 0.0819641961636 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.