Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are no the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is argued that the solely reason for studying other language is serve to went along or work in a foreign countries. Others dispute that and think these are have many different reasons why people should learn a foreign language. This essay will examine both sides of argument and outline my opinion.
On the one hand, people should learn a foreign language in order to travel or work is true. This is because some multinational companies are require people who want to join in must know at fluency the foreign language. As the results, the number of people learning foreign language rise unprecedented cause this help them have a more promotion opportunities. For example, some multinational companies in Viet Nam such as Samsung or Honda require their magner have one other language to work with their opponents. Moreover, if people want to travel to other places to discover the culture they have to learn that country language. Because of if they want to learn more about the place they come people need to ask the local citizen in there so that study a basic conversation before come to that place is really useful.
On the other hand, travel or work is not only the reasons why people learn a foreign language. In some educational institutions in many countries recent years, learning a foreign language is compulsory in their academic programs. For instance, in the country where I live all students in there are obligatory to study English as a major subject and they have to do the English test when they come to high school or university. Furthermore, some are learning foreign language to satisfy their hobby. They want to learn a second language to find out what they like through overseas's newspapers or videos. In addition, some teenagers are try to learn foreign language to pursue their idols and understand what is their idols are saying.
In conclusion, learning other language not only support people in travel or pursue a successful career but also serve their academic programs and their hobby. In my opinion. people should learn foreign language as much as they can to improve their self-value cause the social in now is become globalization.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...heir academic programs and their hobby. In my opinion. people should learn foreign...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, really, second, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1808.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 367.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92643051771 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59786937739 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.460490463215 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 571.5 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0492436185 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.444444444 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3888888889 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.55555555556 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.43551738814 0.244688304435 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.170506382686 0.084324248473 202% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122011870955 0.0667982634062 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.300620839222 0.151304729494 199% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0495420751967 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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