Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Currently, there is a controversial issue whether the main cause to learn a new language is for travelling and working abroad or there are a variety of reasons to study new languages. From my perspective, I agree with the latter, which I will discuss now.
On the one hand, some people explain that to start a new hobby is why they learn new languages. For example, when they speak a new dialect arousing their interest, they feel fascinated and choose to learn that language as a recreational activity in their free time. The other factor that motivates individuals to study a foreign language is to gain perspective about the world. For one thing, culture has a strong connection with language. For those who learn extra languages, apart from their mother tongue, can find the differences in the cultural aspects between other nations and theirs. Therefore, learning new languages is one of the ways to explore new cultures.
On the other hand, I believe that language is also a means to offer people an opportunity to travel and work abroad. There is no doubt that language learning will bring various benefits for those who seek to work in another country. In modern life, where multinational companies require employees to have a good command of languages in order to communicate with international counterparts, bilingual and multilingual ones are able to be appointed to work overseas. The other purpose that language acquisition serves is travelling. To clarify, while monolingual travellers could not visit different places in the world, visitors who know more than one language are capable of arriving in numerous locations and interacting with local people and culture.
To sum up, there are certain reasons why everyone learns a foreign language in terms of their fascination with languages and local culture, besides travelling and working abroad.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, so, therefore, while, apart from, for example, no doubt, for one thing, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1571.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15081967213 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83690123195 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56393442623 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.6204796375 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.214285714 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7857142857 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291376358069 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105311284409 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0634654555997 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196863894503 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0480778146848 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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