3 Some people think that shops should not be allowed to sell food or drink that has been scientifically proved to be bad for people's health. Do you agree or disagree?
Health problems are being dramatically concerned nowadays. Therefore, some people argue that food and drink that are harmful to people should be banned from selling in shops and stores. Personally, I totally follow this idea because of the rationales following.
First of all, although fast food or soft drink may be appetizing, the health of people will be adversely affected. For example, statistics have shown that junk food or canned food is dangerous since they contain a great amount of preservative. If everyone consumes this substance for long time, it will lead to numerous health problems like obesity, allergy, food poisonous or even heart attack that cause many deaths each year.
Another point I want to make is that the health results will be similar when people use beverage containing alcohol or stimulant. When they drink beer or coffee in a limited quantity, it will somehow help them gain more energy to work or even enhance their health. However, if they drink too much, it can bring about the negative consequences for their well-being. Take beer as an example, science has claimed that a glass of beer per day will assist humans with a better circulation, but if it is overused, they can face various problems with their health. First, the liver will be damaged, then the cardiovascular system will be destroyed, leading to heart disease.
To sum up, I believe unhealthy food and drink should be banned from selling in stores. Even though it would be difficult for some people to seek another alternative to their daily meals, especially those who are addicted to convenience food, it is just for a better way to lead a healthy lifestyle.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, so, then, therefore, well, for example, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1393.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99283154122 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60897433621 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598566308244 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8574884135 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.153846154 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4615384615 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15384615385 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.337735551162 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13183025183 0.084324248473 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109248641464 0.0667982634062 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241516522967 0.151304729494 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0776807587893 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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