Some people think that shops should not be allowed to sell food or drink that has been scientifically proved to be bad for people's health. Do you agree or disagree?
Health problems are being dramatically concerned nowadays. Therefore, some people argue that food and drink that are harmful to people should be banned from selling in shops and stores. Personally, I totally follow this idea because of the rationales following.
First of all, although fast food or soft drink may be appetizing, the health of people will be adversely affected. For example, statistics have shown that junk food or canned food is dangerous since they contain a great amount of preservative. If everyone consumes this substance for long time, it will lead to numerous health problems like obesity, allergy, food poisonous or even heart attack that cause many deaths each year.
The other reason is that when the public’s use of beverage such as beer and cafe containing alcohol or stimulant, it will somehow help them gain more energy to work or even enhance their health. However, if they drink too much, it can bring about the negative consequences for their well-being. Take beer as an example, science has claimed that a glass of beer per day will assist humans with a better circulation, but if it is overused, they can face various problems with their health. First, the liver will be damaged, then the cardiovascular system will be destroyed, leading to heart disease.
To sum up, I believe unhealthy food and drink should be banned from selling in stores. Even though it would be difficult for some people to seek another alternative to their daily meals, especially those who are addicted to convenience food, it is just for a better way to lead a healthy lifestyle.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, so, then, therefore, well, for example, such as, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1338.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01123595506 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63265777364 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614232209738 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.6679949487 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.5 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.25 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323743446973 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128640616136 0.084324248473 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115537698787 0.0667982634062 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228491504864 0.151304729494 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0965400949303 0.056905535591 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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