Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss bth these views and give your own opinion.
In modern society people can have comparatively more free time than the past. So some invest their time and money on learning foreign languages. However some people believe the only purpose of learning other languages just for travel or career. On the other hand, some think that can’t be only reason and should not be. Personally, i support the latter.
Definitely, learning other languages can be very helpful for variety of aspects: financial, experiential and so on. In detail, travelers can save their money by speaking a language from where they are traveling and communicating with native people can give them more valuable and practical information than guide books. Moreover, if someone is fluent in foreign languages so if she get a chance to live in other countries, that means she can have a lot more possibilities in her life than people who speak only their mother tongue.
But, learning other languages can open the other view to see the world or status. When South Korea was under military dictatorship, there was severe press censorship. The only way to figure out the truth was foreign press. The dictator Jeon Du Hwan killed hundreds of the citizen in Gwangju for a reason that they protested against the dictatorship. However, people in other region weren’t informed since the government controlled the press in the South Korea. They finally noticed that incident by the New York Times. Since then, many people learned English on purpose to find the not fabricated fact.
To sum up, learning other languages has various benefits, economical and experiential, for sure. Still, its worth lies far beyond than those two reasons.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'finally', 'however', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'still', 'then', 'as for', 'to sum up', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.249201277955 0.247107183377 101% => OK
Verbs: 0.137380191693 0.155533422707 88% => OK
Adjectives: 0.105431309904 0.0946595960268 111% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0575079872204 0.0501214627716 115% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0351437699681 0.0437548338989 80% => OK
Prepositions: 0.11821086262 0.122226691241 97% => OK
Participles: 0.0319488817891 0.0403226058552 79% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.64809773322 2.80594681477 94% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0159744408946 0.0326793684256 49% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.00638977635783 0.00163938923432 390% => OK
Determiners: 0.0798722044728 0.0861772015684 93% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0255591054313 0.021408717616 119% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00958466453674 0.011925033212 80% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1663.0 1933.35771543 86% => OK
No of words: 272.0 316.048096192 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.11397058824 6.12580529183 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20517956788 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.360294117647 0.374742101984 96% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.264705882353 0.28420135186 93% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.172794117647 0.203846283523 85% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.113970588235 0.137316102897 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64809773322 2.80594681477 94% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.037074148 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621323529412 0.56093040696 111% => OK
Word variations: 68.7971907426 60.7387585426 113% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0891783567 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.7743622355 77% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6563672932 49.517814964 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.8235294118 127.492653851 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.7743622355 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.647058823529 0.814263465372 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 3.99599198397 75% => OK
Readability: 42.4705882353 49.1944974215 86% => OK
Elegance: 1.73611111111 1.69124875643 103% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.362489143515 0.332605444948 109% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0891077515122 0.102741220458 87% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0684311158018 0.0668466124924 102% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.492866044226 0.534860350844 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.124234256235 0.148594505496 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121125671766 0.134430193775 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0653662780101 0.0742795772207 88% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.168007445453 0.324371583561 52% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.107044443918 0.0638462369009 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213075081542 0.228012699653 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0811461484851 0.058150111329 140% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.68436873747 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.41683366733 176% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 5.90881763527 85% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.5751503006 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 5.0 1.9629258517 255% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 10.4468937876 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.