Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
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While some people believe a foreign language mere is required to be learned when a person wants to travel or work in a foreign country, others contend there are more reasons in order to learn an exotic language. I agree with the second view because it benefits both society and person health.
On the one hand, there are some good reasons that foreign languages are essential for both society and people and I agree. In terms of the mental health of an individual, since, memorizing new words, phrases, sentences will act as a simulator for the brain, it obviously will eliminate some mental diseases such as Alzheimer. From the perspective of social issues, learning language is essential to many different fields of society. Firstly, in education, it is vital to access global books and articles, lack of exotic language may disrupt receiving knowledge from different resources in the world that are eminent references. secondly, many domestic investments are manipulated by a foreign person. they may be tempted to manipulate the financial documents. Therefore, a single language brings nothing but troubles.
On the other hand, a reason why some people argue learning an exotic language benefits just when a person needs to travel or work abroad is that many people around the world learn various languages just when they want to visit that country or they may migrate there or even for a work meeting. for example, an international meeting for global warming requires all the participates to be familiar with English language to communicate with each other.
to conclude, while some people contend, using a foreign language is just in traveling or working in other countries. I agree with the view that foreign languages benefit the health of a person and also the society in different aspects.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1527.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10702341137 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65684911436 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518394648829 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.9050457183 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.461538462 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.84615384615 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336293534051 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123171818578 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117852252657 0.0667982634062 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241035262967 0.151304729494 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0721961490192 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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