Some people say that in our modern age, it is unnecessary to teach children about the skills of handwriting. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is certainly true that with the rapid development of technology, people have easily accessed any skill for using the internet. In this contemporary era, Many people believe that handwriting skill is not important to learn for children. In my point of view, I strongly disagree with above statement with reasonable example.
To begin with, nowadays many people think that due to the usage of technology, then can easily do their work in internet. Firstly, in the field of education, most of people learn though digital platform of learning such as BYJU'S, edX, in learning and many others. Which can easily learn about different way learning at home for using of internet. For example, a survey done by Oxford University show that almost 80% student learn digital way rather than tradition method in last year in America. Moreover, due to usage of internet, people can easily share about any product bills. For instance, recently I carried my cloths, importantly I pay before shopkeeper shared me my product bill in Whatsapp.
However, on the flip side of coin, handwriting skill is equally important in every fields. First of all,Many people think that writing is most important skill, which can revise about who he/she wrote. The best example of this is that most of scholar student are famous for using a writing school in their school. Secondly, handwriting is important for send a resume for job. It can said that sending resume to any company must to show about the cover and importantly their handwriting of any job-taken.
In recapitulation, although there are two contrasting view regarding writing skill, as far as I am concerned that handwriting skill is equally important with the technology .
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 158, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...et. Firstly, in the field of education, most of people learn though digital platform of learni...
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Line 3, column 103, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Many
... important in every fields. First of all,Many people think that writing is most impor...
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Line 3, column 382, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'say'
Suggestion: say
...rtant for send a resume for job. It can said that sending resume to any company must...
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Line 3, column 422, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
...said that sending resume to any company must to show about the cover and importantly th...
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Line 4, column 173, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...is equally important with the technology .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, for example, for instance, such as, first of all, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1427.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06028368794 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69659698615 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542553191489 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.3755763524 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 95.1333333333 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136755216419 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0547120995128 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0418224669155 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0960518925032 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0272302769421 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.