Some people say that parents should encourage their children to take part in organized group activities in their free time. Others say that it is important for children to learn how to occupy themselves on their own. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Leisure time plays an integral part in a child's stages of development, and parents role is very vital which could aid the child develop positively or negatively. However, many people believe that mothers and fathers should always encourage their kids to use their leisure time in participating in arranged group work while others say that, it is vital for kids to realize how to engage themselves. This essay will analyse both views and arrive at a conclusion.
Arranged group work is very pertinent to a child's development as it teaches the kid how to build social skills, boost his or her self-confident, promote their interpersonal relationship with others and most importantly, it encourages team work. For instance, a child who is a member of a sport club that meets every Saturday will have an opportunity to socialize with other people, make new friends who share same interest, learn other people's culture, religion, beliefs and individual ways of life thereby boosting the child's interactive skills and promoting team work.
Nevertheless, it is believed that some children are already overloaded with academic activities and should be allowed to do whatever they like at their leisure time. I strongly disagree with this, and believe that parents should monitor and encourage their kids to involve in activities that will develop them physically and mentally. For example, in this digital Era where children have access to the Internet, they connect, chat and exchange contact with people on Facebook, Twitter, instagram, whatsapp and telegram. They are exposed to illicit activities and pornography which do not add any importance to their development.
In conclusion, while people's opinion on this issue varies, l think that children who are encouraged and monitored by their parents to use their leisure time wisely for arranged group work will build good interpersonal relationship and amongst others encourage team working skills.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, nevertheless, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1652.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36363636364 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82343606193 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584415584416 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.0050664955 49.4020404114 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 165.2 106.682146367 155% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.8 20.7667163134 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329383681414 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13269191795 0.084324248473 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0757635454664 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208521338042 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0591859884632 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.2 13.0946893788 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.57 50.2224549098 65% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.4 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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