Some people say that sports play an important role in society. Others, however, think that it is nothing more than a leisure activity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Some people say that sports play an important role in society. Others, however, think that it is nothing more than a leisure activity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In the global era, most of the people in the world are playing various sports, such as football, gymnastics, basketball, jogging, etc. The important aspects of sports are for proving health rates and happiness. In my view, I believe that sports take an important role for all of humankind. I hold this view for some reasons which are set out below.

To begin with, I would like to argue that sports were categorized by the world health organization (who) as the great medicine for reducing numerous people's illness. The survey from world health organization stated that 80% of people who always routinize do the sports twice a week, their bodies lean-to immune from the plethora of sickness. In contrast, people who does not take sports acitivities are risky to plentiful deseases.

On the other hand, sports activities also enable to escalate the number of interests of a country. The data of health sports centre stated that some developed countries, such as united Kingdom, Ireland, as well as united states which all of the concern to facilitate many sports infrastructures and events for their citizens, tend to improve their number of economical benefits significantly. These conditions occurred that the quality of health and happiness have an implication towards the quality of people's productivity.

However, there are some people have been believing that sports activities do not affect health and happiness, and it was alleged just as a leisure activity. Unfortunately, there are little pieces of evidence for supporting this view.

Finally, I believe that sports could improve the health rates, happiness, as well as productivity of the society.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, however, if, so, well, in contrast, such as, as well as, in my view, to begin with, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1405.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26217228464 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79956972625 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558052434457 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.3411406458 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.076923077 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5384615385 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92307692308 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1962332826 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0755486103881 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0470865412473 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114496212996 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0500021732692 0.056905535591 88% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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