Although it is sometimes thought that television commercials have significant advantages, other people believe that these advertisements could be detrimental for the society. In my opinion, I think that advertisements bring awareness among society for various products and services.
On the one hand, some people think that different types of promotional advertisements through television are beneficial for people for products and services selection and I agree. In the other words, vast number of advertisements are grabbing attention of millions of people by various kinds of media; for instance, television, radio, billboards, leaflets, pamphlets, poster, flyer, social media and others. However, TV commercial is the most effective way for product awareness thoroughly and effectively because people can watch these advertisements and make right purchase decision accordingly. Furthermore, promotional advertisement of launching for new product, service and offer by existing business or new start-up business, through television media is ecstatic mean to reach immense number of consumers at the same time.
On the other hand, it is often believed that some utterly spurious television commercials could negatively affect entire society. For example, some companies promote their product through absolutely fake television advertisements that could mislead the society with regards to product quality and functionality. Moreover, advertisements through TV is expensive so it's not at all possible for all business particularly small business to promote their products, inspite of having excellent quality or felicitous results and people remain unaware in terms of selection of excellent quality of products, offers and services.
In conclusion, while people may vary in their opinion, I think that television advertisements are good way to get product knowledge and to promote new commodities and offers.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, while, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1644.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.95652173913 5.12529762239 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19187887258 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554347826087 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.1202409633 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 164.4 106.682146367 154% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.8 7.06120827912 210% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151714537107 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0739445741467 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0306539544512 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109896130801 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0168074683667 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.4 13.0946893788 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.15 50.2224549098 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.58 12.4159519038 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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