Some people says that international sports events help in world peace. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
During ancient decades, sports played only in parks and were part of outdoor games. However, in contemporary settings, sports become pushed out from boundaries and leads towards national and international level. Therefore, some peppy believe that global sports exhibitions in higher proportion may promote peace and charm to the world. I completely agree with this notion and reasons are explained in the forthcoming paragraphs. To begin with, nowadays, sports become major source of entertainment and also become source to interact with foreign nations. Because, there are numerous events which are held by global authorities in which all the nations become together. Although, sports victory depicts as picture of victory similar to war, however, nations become together. Due to this, every nation become able to build their interactions and bondings with another countries especially with host authority. Therefore, this shows positive impact on all over the world peace. For instance, Olympics is the popular global event in which alll the participants come from all over the world and receive chance to show interaction with foreign nations.
Moreover, the sports are also leads toward patriotic emotions. Become, before the starting of these exhibitions, every nation sing their national anthems to proliferate the priority of their nation. Due to this, every individual of nations show pleasure, equal importance and patriotic emotion towards their nation. This also boost the confidence of players. Apart from that, there are also plenty of countries such as west indies and similar to that which are hard to find on map. However, such countries are popular for their sports. For instance, cricket, west indies always participate in the world cup due to which they become popular and seek out in front of the world. As a result, thus shows positive impression towards the peace and joy of the world.
To recapitulate, it is strongly shows agreement that global sports events promote pleasure and joy towards world with great positive aspects such as global interaction, incline in patriotic emotion and popularity so on.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 235, Rule ID: BELIEVE_BELIEF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'belief' (noun) instead of believe (verb)?
Suggestion: belief
...ernational level. Therefore, some peppy believe that global sports exhibitions in highe...
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Line 1, column 556, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ource to interact with foreign nations. Because, there are numerous events which are he...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, apart from, for instance, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1798.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3993993994 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61953106951 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516516516517 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 553.5 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.2839636054 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.6315789474 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5263157895 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.10526315789 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125364144137 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0433228361757 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0407583188581 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0883920766164 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0304586635077 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.74 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 235, Rule ID: BELIEVE_BELIEF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'belief' (noun) instead of believe (verb)?
Suggestion: belief
...ernational level. Therefore, some peppy believe that global sports exhibitions in highe...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 556, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ource to interact with foreign nations. Because, there are numerous events which are he...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, apart from, for instance, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1798.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3993993994 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61953106951 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516516516517 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 553.5 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.2839636054 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.6315789474 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5263157895 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.10526315789 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125364144137 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0433228361757 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0407583188581 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0883920766164 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0304586635077 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.74 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.