Some folks believe that all youths ought to be needed to work as a volunteer in their spare time so that they can aid provisional societies. However, i believe that adopting this type of strategy would neither benefit youths nor communities. This essay will support my opinion with relevant examples.
On the one hand, the advocates insist that undertaking unpaid work is a paramount determinant for the generation of absolute confidence in an individual. As the person is likely to encounter people from various backgrounds, it is highly probable that the citizen will establish effective communi...
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 8.0 out of 9
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 17 15
No. of Words: 403 350
No. of Characters: 2069 1500
No. of Different Words: 240 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.48 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.134 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.909 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 160 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 131 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 87 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 58 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 23.706 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.006 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.412 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.282 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.474 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.034 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 151, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...can aid provisional societies. However, i believe that adopting this type of stra...
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Line 5, column 572, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...glittering career. On the second place, i do not believe that the society would y...
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Line 5, column 679, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...g youths to work as volunteers. Indeed, i would argue that it goes against the ri...
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Line 7, column 193, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...discouraged to get down to unpaid work.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, second, so, well, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2116.0 1615.20841683 131% => OK
No of words: 403.0 315.596192385 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25062034739 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48049772903 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99517598631 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 176.041082164 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593052109181 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 664.2 506.74238477 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7228296051 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.470588235 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7058823529 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.70588235294 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251288029494 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0727815240326 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592287725407 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151358553153 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0421349241657 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.91 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 131.0 78.4519038076 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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