Some people think that all University students should study whether they like. Other believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such those related to science and technology.

Essay topics:

Some people think that all University students should study whether they like. Other believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such those related to science and technology.

the university is teaching students many courses of subjects that students can select. some people hold onto notion that students should lean only beneficial subjects that is technology and science. There advantages of both sides of conception.

Initially, wide ranges of courses at the university are provided students to choose which one they prefer to study. many students are good at art are able to study about liberal art. Furthermore, some students are intelligence in the field course of social and science or language able to activate the brain in subjects that they can choose. students will not satisfy to study the university if they are enforced to study in science and technology.

The second perspective is supported students that good at calculated, science, and technology. students who well-analyze would be appreciated to study subjects that related in science and technology subjects because they can control their brain to concentrate on experiments of science. Moreover, students will feel more join in the class if they can study what they prefer.

Both conception that encourages students to study whether subjects that they prefer and study in science and technology subjects depend on students satisfying to choose. The best effective solution for studying is to choose what we love to learn and students will able to adjust beneficial of knowledge to the future.

In conclusion, the effective way to study at the university is to choose the subject that we can spend all entire life focusing on it and it will be useful in the future.

Votes
Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

Comments

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, moreover, second, so, well, in conclusion, of course

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1324.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2125984252 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76183838331 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 176.041082164 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.46062992126 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8429083151 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.846153846 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5384615385 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.30769230769 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.43594222354 0.244688304435 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.165199543004 0.084324248473 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0988987515397 0.0667982634062 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.253741649266 0.151304729494 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0333950689976 0.056905535591 59% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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