some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology.
discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is a debatable issue for people that students should be free to choose their favorite field of study or they are obliged to select career-oriented technology and science major subject. I agree with the authority in choosing major for university students and I will expand both viewpoints in the following paragraphs.
on one hand, a university is a place which, provides students with multiple skills in various fields. Students should have freedom of choice in their major due to the fact that their talents and genius arouses if they participate in programs or subjects which suit their abilities and interests. restricting college students to continue their education with predefined syllabus contribute to low self-esteem and frustration as well in their future positions, moreover, their potential talent suppressed by the passage of time. As a result, we witness a wide range of employees who are obedient without any creativity.
On the other hand, it is a commonly held belief that to limit the students' field of study to the subjective majors.as the matter of the fact, it is because of globalization and the necessity of expert ones. students must be prepared for being in work-related circumstances in a rivalry world. that is why the university cultivates their minds regarding to science. if the student picks their interests by authority, some position depletes of expertise laborers that is a fundamental ingredient of a country.
To sum up all mankind have the liberty to choose freely especially university students who can provide society with extensive progress if their desires are fulfilled. However, some limitations should be imposed to students to avoid from lack of experienced workforce in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, well, as a result, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1459.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26714801444 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98508589348 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58844765343 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.5057752473 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.583333333 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0833333333 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24570912624 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0904463878814 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0724917573034 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161357897579 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0604480049259 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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