increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve the traffic and pollution problems.
to what extent do you agree or disagree?
what other measures do you think might be effective?
Traffic congestion is one of the controversial issues in all around the world. It is argued that the high level of petrol’s prices is the best way to cut down the density of traffic and consequently the pollution difficulties. I am prepared to evince my opposition to this issue in the following paragraphs.
The first and foremost reason for traffic problems is the gazellians of habitat who want to cope up with industrialized world , which contributes to a large number of private cars through the roads. , However, rise in a petrol price is not the main and most appropriate way due to the fact that , it leads to a high amount of ticket’s prices for public transportation In a same way, therefore, people show less tendency to use subway, bus and etc.
The pollution and traffic setbacks is largely in charge of government .They should raise people’s awareness of using private car and some drastic measures should be taken.Take, for example, government officials should provide citizens with high quality and safe pubic methods of transporting ,in addition they should specify the special road for cars with more than one member that encourages people to share their cars. Another alternative for a private car is a bicycle that must exist all around the city for easy access of population freely. Moreover, the government can support companies and give them fund to produce electric cars that are without any harmful fuel, instead, they are a kind of friendly environment products which contributes to lower air pollution.
To sum up, increasing petrol price in order to decrease traffic and pollution is not an issue. Therefore, the government and individuals must take drastic measures to avoid this intractable problem by providing facilities and paying more attention to the environment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, for example, in addition, kind of, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1521.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15593220339 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97033703837 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 99.9887993727 49.4020404114 202% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 152.1 106.682146367 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.5 20.7667163134 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116995406218 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.053143810361 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0604946621048 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0853121031956 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355374116092 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.24 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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