Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others think that they should be allowed to study subjects related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience
Science and technology are the booming areas of this century. Every aspect of human life is governed by technology, due to which it makes necessary for everyone to know about them while in the university. Some people are of the opinion that students should be allowed to learn subjects related to science and technology, while others believe that this freedom of selecting subjects be given to students. I am of the latter opinion. Nevertheless, this essay will discuss both the view points.
On one hand, technology helps us to have a comfortable and luxurious life. For instance, there are so many devices like mobile phones that help us communicate with people across the globe and then there is home appliances like vacuum cleaner, dish washer that helps to achieve day to day chores easily. It is a good idea for everyone to keep on par and hence has an advantage to study about these at degree level by opting at least one subject. This way they understand the intricacies of machinery they use on daily basis.
On the other hand, students have very different interests and it is important for them to pursue this. They would want to study politics, arts, music or even theatre that are quite different from science. For instance, when a student wants to build a career and aim for becoming the president of the nation, then it would be right to go for subjects like social studies, economics and history that helps gather information about their field of interest. If such a student opts for a subject like nanotechnology, then it would not serve any benefits.
Moreover, forcing a subject in a curriculum will make students loose interest in it and turn out to be a waste of time and resources.
In conclusion, I agree with the fact that students should have the freedom to take up subjects according to their likes, but at the same time studying subjects related to science reap its own benefits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, then, while, at least, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1585.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78851963746 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58433742726 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570996978852 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.3157488921 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.666666667 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0666666667 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53333333333 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290642649793 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0884331304032 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0588406520591 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146326023683 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0532608536503 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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