In recent decades, we live in the center of innovation. People always think to develop technology to be more efficient and effective for human activity. This is why the statement to learn about science and technology has emerged to the public.
To begin with, we have moved from industrialization to technology era. Many activities among people have controlled by technology such as transportation, smartphone, and internet. Hi-tech enhance the new innovation for better humankind which this argument is contradictive about other subjects such as history that learn about the past. By learning of the technology, the discovery has emerged to the community. For instance, oil and gas are the most energy resource for human life but the revelation of shale gas give more advantageous because this energy produces low carbon emission than oil and gas. Others example, the UK has improved solar panel as the main energy resource. So that many people believe that learning about science will support the advancement of the country.
On the other hand, the world isn't governed by the one subject which leads to change. The social subject is needed to support the improvement of technology. For example, the invention of modern aircraft that is produced by Boeing and Airbus is learned from chronicle. If the development of technology didn't support by other subjects, it wouldn't give the idea to make sustainable technology.
In conclusion, both learning about technology or other subjects give advantageous for human life because technology without management is nothing.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 201, Rule ID: NEW_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'innovation'.
Suggestion: innovation
...hone, and internet. Hi-tech enhance the new innovation for better humankind which this argumen...
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Line 3, column 682, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[3]
Message: “So that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...olar panel as the main energy resource. So that many people believe that learning about...
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Line 5, column 30, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
...ountry. On the other hand, the world isnt governed by the one subject which leads...
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Line 5, column 301, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...nicle. If the development of technology didnt support by other subjects, it wouldnt g...
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Line 5, column 337, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
...ogy didnt support by other subjects, it wouldnt give the idea to make sustainable techn...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1329.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35887096774 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93774007144 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556451612903 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.0336879415 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.6 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5333333333 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113464821359 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0433049004505 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0351328126685 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0721905907121 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0188543450896 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.51 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.