It could be one of the crucial challenges for students to decide which major could be more appropriate for them. Some people believe that the selected fields must be practical in the future. Others, including me, disagree with this claim and think it should be optional for them to opt the favorite major. In this essay, both sides of this view beside my opinion will be discussed.
On the one hand, nothing can be more powerful than human willing so university students as the scholar community in every society should have this right to select the major that they are interested in because having passion keep them to continue their studies. The experience-based evidences have shown that the most effective reason which encourages students to keep going until reaching their goals is neither easy field nor functional one, it is their enthusiasm that gives them energy to prevent them from surrendering.
On the other hand, predicting the future with regard to which subjects will be in a paramount placement, is complicated and no one could determine the exact answer for this. Therefore, the best approach is to consider all majors as the significant subjects and pay attention to them equally. However, nowadays, technology and science are one of the best topic, they may have not remained on the top in the coming years and it is unfair to neglect the importance of some others such as psychology and economic.
In conclusion, however we are living in modern era and technology has penetrated in every aspects of our life, my firmly conviction is that other topics are critical as much as technology and science, and also it is students’ privilege to decide in which ways, their lives can be built.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, in conclusion, such as, with regard to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1427.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93771626298 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68254701288 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581314878893 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.7210396225 49.4020404114 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.7 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.9 20.7667163134 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23103153714 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0986794221228 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519705274398 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131016959309 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0591945276684 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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