Some people think that being born to a poor country is a bad luck while others believe that it only helps fuel one’s aspiration to succeed. Discuss both view and give your opinion.
While many people consider being born to an underdeveloped nation is an unfortunate event, others argue that it can motivate people to succeed in their lives. This essay will discuss both points of view and present my own opinion.
On the one hand, there are several reasons why people believe that being a citizen of a third-world is a stroke of bad luck. As a sad truth, an impoverished nation is resource-stretched and sometimes unsafe to live in. Children in these countries do not stay in the educational systems as long as their peers from the developed world since family and the government lack the necessary resources to support their academic pursuit. For example, due to economic reasons, children in many African families are forced to leave school at a young age to work for coal mining factories, leaving them academically disadvantageous. This would be detrimental to their future career prospects as they are only able to get manual-demanding jobs with low incomes.
On the other hand, being born to a poor nation can be a driving force for one’s achievement later in life. As they have been through hardships early, many people gradually develop a desire to live a more comfortable life. This leads them to strive for academic success, a stable career and social status, all of which takes time, effort and long-term commitment. For instance, born to an underprivileged home in Africa, Barack Obama made his effort to become the president of his country, which he tried to lead out of poverty.
In conclusion, a poor background may be considered as bad luck since it leaves people with less access to educational opportunities; however, I believe that living in a poor nation can give people motivation to strive for a better life.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, third, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1459.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94576271186 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95982095315 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613559322034 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9491450638 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.583333333 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5833333333 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.91666666667 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24266826031 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0845888885157 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0817273100381 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156961386155 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0617751039866 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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