Some people think that cars is the best wat to tavel in cities while others believe a bicycle is better way. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is argued that some children have owned their abilities such as sports music since they born while the others do not have. However, some people assume that each child can learn these skills to become a profession later. I completely agree that some children have already these talents while the others are not. In this essay, I will look at both sides of the argument and give my opinion.
On one hand, Some people reasonably argue that skills are a special feature and unfortunately every child has not them. The reason is that these abilities are usually transferred by genes. For example, If a family has own musical ability, it is probably that its child has learned everything about music fastly. Also, these children who have abilities can become more successful athletes, actors or singers. As a result, they can achieve more success in their future career.
On the other hand, the others view that children do not need any abilities to become accomplished people and they can be taught what they do correctly. In other words, having good teachers and families promote and encourage their children to be experts in their field. However, there is little evidence to support the view that after learning these skills can come achievement the same as children have talents when they have to spend more effort and learn slowly.
To sum up, although some people wrongly assume that people can gain these abilities later when they are taught, the others conclude that talents are not learned after they born. Personally, I believe that talents is a natural gift and any children should use this in the most correct way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, so, while, for example, such as, as a result, in other words, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1407.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11636363636 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84944767738 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541818181818 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 125.329007018 49.4020404114 254% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 140.7 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5 7.06120827912 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138034973799 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0575978111569 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495303365235 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0944000843397 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0490393621035 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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