Some people think that certain prisoners should be made to do unpaid community work instead of being put behind bars. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
It is thought that lawbreakers should undertake community service without salaries in lieu of being imprisoned. Personally, I completely dissent with this statement for certain reasons which will be explained in this essay.
To commence with, one evident explanation of why social work can not replace the role of prison is somewhat related to education, deterrence, retribution, and rehabilitation. In fact, it should be a part of criminal justice systems, raising a sense of serving society as a way of paying a debt for wrongdoings. For example, low-risk prisoners can engage in physical jobs such as cleaning the street, washing vehicles, and so on. However, that provides them and people being prone to break the law neither morality lessons nor a particular direction for future except for continuing committing a crime. Therefore, if government substitutes community work for putting in jail, the rate of crime can be more dramatic.
In addition, another underlying factor to take under advisement is not to ensure the long-term better protection for society. To be more detailed, supposing that wrongdoers just need work free for the community with no strict supervision of the police in the rest time, local residents rarely have peace in mind when they stand a chance to impair local safety anytime. In my opinion, in terms of petty criminals and youth crimes, they shoud be sent to reform camps with the aim of reeducation and vocational training. Moreover, if offenders do rehabilitation programs well, the time in jail can go down basing on attitude and minor or serious crime. Thus, incarceration is the most effective control method to deter offenses.
In conclusion, although it is indisputable that community work programs assist in their rehabilitation, I totally assert that the other aforementioned elements are more significant to prevent crimes.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1582.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3265993266 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02948735749 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.673400673401 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6084415338 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.692307692 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8461538462 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6923076923 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188148279453 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0614509247458 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423829850911 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104513177962 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0397737679192 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.1 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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