Some people think that childcare centers provide the best services for children of preschool age Other working parents think that family members such as grandparents will be better carers for their kids Discuss both views and give your opinion

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Some people think that childcare centers provide the best services for children of preschool age. Other working parents think that family members such as grandparents will be better carers for their kids. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Currently, many parents tend to be busy working so they need to rely on someone to take care of their kids. While some people think childcare centers offer the best care, I would argue that children should be looked after by their grandparents.
On the one hand, it is believed that youngsters should be sent to childcare centers for some reasons. The first one is that those centers are professional organizations, their staff are well trained and having good babysitting skills. For example, when a child falls and gets himself injured, the staff will give him first aid. Furthermore, children can have a chance to make friends with their peers when coming there, they might increase the communication and language abilities. If the children are looked after by their family, they will feel a bit lonely.
On the other hand, I believe that it is a better idea for grandparents to take care of their grandparents. Firstly, as the grandparents have lived many years and have brought up their own offspring, they have much more experience in raising children. For instance, they might know how to calm a kid down when he or she cries. Secondly, since grandparents are family members, they will love the child than other people do. As a result, they tend to spend more time and effort caring for children compared to the childcare staff member. Finally, the children looked after by their grandparents are more likely to be family-oriented and appreciate the value of a happy family which in turn strengthens family ties.
In conclusion, while there are some benefits of taking care of children at childcare centers, I believe that grandparents should raise them.

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Average: 8.1 (2 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1366.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98540145985 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7918252908 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583941605839 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.8019950522 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 97.5714285714 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5714285714 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0714285714 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275696961793 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0941525987716 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607795699024 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155331846345 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0490425254021 0.056905535591 86% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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