Some people think that childcare centers provide the best services for children of preschool age. Other working parents think that family members such as grandparents will be better carers for their kids. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In the recent days, there are a general consensus that the most up-to-date services should be given child-rearing by childcare centers. While others believe that letting them to be nurtured by family members is much more better. In this essay, I am going to discuss both point of view and explain why I am prone to the former opinion.
There are some people who believe that it is beneficial for their children to stay with grandparents. This is because family member can assure a safe and trustworthy environment for kids’ growth. As grandparents are those who always provide undivided attention for their grandchildren, they are able to shells kids away from potentially dangerous situation in which toddler can injure themselves. The second is that this phenomenon help parent save money. With low-income family who could not afford to give their boys or girls to the kindergarten schools, letting them to stay with grandparents is the better option.
Although, the merits of the latter view are undisputed, I argue that providing the best services for children is more essentials. Initially, it gives kids an opportunity to be accustomed with the educational environment, hence preventing them from bewilderment and also be effortless to intergrate with schools and friends. Secondly, childcare centers provide the most suitable program for the all-conclusive development of the young clients. There are many facilities such as playground, garden, swimming pool which allow children to learn about natural worlds and strengthen their constitution. For example, Schools in Vietnam are equipped with modern facilities and design extra-curriculum like planting trees, making cakes and learning Kungfu which make kids have the best experience when studying.
In conclusion, I believe that both point of views have their merits, however it is more advantaged to send children to childcare center because it establishes a full-scale development for kids and help them adopt with school.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'consensus'.
Suggestion: consensus
In the recent days, there are a general consensus that the most up-to-date services shoul...
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'consensuses'?
Suggestion: consensuses
...In the recent days, there are a general consensus that the most up-to-date services shoul...
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Line 1, column 137, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ven child-rearing by childcare centers. While others believe that letting them to be ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, second, secondly, so, then, while, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1685.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41800643087 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97968917422 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585209003215 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4700622939 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.357142857 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2142857143 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.350665177113 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111624528838 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04744770098 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195122364971 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0238233398105 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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