The chart and table below give information about population figures in Japan.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrate the population in Japan in the past, present and predict the in the future while the table gives information for the percentage of individuals in two different age of groups.
Overall , the number of residents in this country had increased for the past 65years and it is predicted that this figure will seen a decrease in the future, in the meantime, the proportion of citizens over 65years old is forecasted to increase while the other will witness the opposite pattern.
Starting with the bar graph, in 1950, 84.1million is the number of people living in Japan, after experiencing a steady growth to 125.5million in 1995, this figure leveled off at the average of 126milion to 2010. Then, the quantities of Japanese will decrease rapidly to 89.9million in the final year.
Moving to the table, in 1950, the percentage of those who 65yeas old or over was 4.1% which was lower than the total figure which was 4.9%. 55years later, there was a rocket in this proportion to 25.7% while that for its counterpart was 20.0%. After increasing to 2035, the percentage of over 65-year-old people will see a slight fell to 36.5% in 2035 while the opposite will be true for the other.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...in two different age of groups. Overall , the number of residents in this country...
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Message: Did you mean 'see' or 'be seen'?
Suggestion: see; be seen
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 994.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 207.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80193236715 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62477105229 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 288.9 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.0917729296 43.030603864 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.0 112.824112599 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.5714285714 22.9334400587 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.14285714286 5.23603664747 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0846993242643 0.215688989381 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0423431824451 0.103423049105 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0705401649382 0.0843802449381 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0697862352519 0.15604864568 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0821094398164 0.0819641961636 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.2329268293 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 10.3012195122 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.0658536585 163% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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