Education play a paramount role in every individuals life. Few people think that it is beneficial for children's to study educational subjects in their leisure time while other believe that this will have negative effects on children. Both the views will be critiqued and give a reasonable answer along with my opinion.
On the one hand, scholars should focus on educational activity during their free time because it help them in their future. To explicate it, educational activities does not mean that they only focus on their study.In their free time they can also learn those things in which they have interest and that will helpful in their career. To epitome, there is an application in mobile phones which is Byju's app.In that application children's learn different types of things like art and craft , knowledge about robots work and also enhance their knowledge by learning new things. In addition, educational activities also sharp their minds.When students learn things with interest they can compete with other students.Also, they focus their mind to build into inventions and creativity.
On the contrary, it is awful for children's to spend their spare time in study.Because it effects their health.As a consequence, they become moody and can also face problem of depression when they do not play outdoor games and do not interact with other person. To exemplify, a survey was conducted by health organization in 2016 has revealed that 70% of children's were suffered from mental issues because they did not participated in outdoor activities.Moreover, outdoor games also helps in overall growth and they can stay healthy.
To recapitulate, I believe that parents should make a time-table for children's in which they can manage their time for study as well as for games and it will not effect on their study and growth.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ean that they only focus on their study.In their free time they can also learn th...
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...st they can compete with other students.Also, they focus their mind to build into in...
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...dy as well as for games and it will not effect on their study and growth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, well, while, as for, in addition, as well as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1539.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14715719064 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79199450811 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548494983278 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.6504916224 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.9 106.682146367 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.9 20.7667163134 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.33014374665 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145061565648 0.084324248473 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0881827819955 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207445979725 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0501931454363 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.0946893788 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.