Some people think that criminals should be given longer terms in prison, so as to reduce the crime rate. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In this day and age, crime has been a topic of great concern in our societies. One school of thought holds that once governments extend the imprisonment period, the number of offenders will gradually drop out. In my own point of view, I would agree with this punitive system.
On the one hand, there exist a couple of beneficial effects in terms of long-period imprisonment. First and foremost, longer imprisonment could be considered as an effective deterrent and bring a preventative value, compared to other crime-fighting solutions. In other words, it can deter premeditated criminal acts by some people in the public who have intention to carry a crime. Furthermore, staying in a separated space over a long period provides prisoners with an appropriate opportunity to ponder over their trauma they caused to their victims. Therefore, after being released, they could live a prevalent life with more positive attitude.
On the other hand, the significance of rehabilitation should not be neglected. Apparently, the fact that owning to the cut-throat competition in today’s world, a great many people find themselves under immense pressure of financial deficit is the major culprit of fraud or deception. It is believed that training a manual skill allows wrongdoers to earn money when returning to society. When they can pay their own bills, the rate of crime will absolutely decline. Additionally, it is of great importance that death penalty should be applied for particular hazardous criminals as serial killer or rapist because only this strictest sentence could discourage people from doing such those evil crimes without thinking about the consequences.
In conclusion, I firmly believe that longer time imprisonment could bring some positive effects on cutting down the crime rate. However, other measures as education or capital execution are also required to tackle this problem.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, first, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, in conclusion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1611.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38795986622 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97661117574 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.665551839465 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.2591470558 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.4 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9333333333 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206323532032 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0578246314157 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0504580283564 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106501181689 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0449460302229 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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