Some people think that the government should change the way individuals live, while others believe that they should choose the way themselves. Discuss these both points of view and give your opinion.
In this day and age, one school of thought holds that governments should take responsibility for supporting people to change their lifestyle. Meanwhile, some commentators contend that in terms of how residents live, their personal awareness should be taken into consideration. In this essay, I will be discussing both views and giving my own opinions.
To begin with, it is only policymakers that have enough budget and influence to change one whole society. Like for instance, in order to degrade the number of obesity patients, which has climbed up because of junk food overconsumption, the government could impose high tax on every convenient food companies, which makes the price of those products higher than other healthier ones. Apparently, the abnormal considerable price encourages more and more consumers to abdicate their habit of eating convenient food. In addition, they also subsidize money for installing more sport facilities in public parks, which supports people to do more physical exercises. As a result, a hazardous social habit as living a sedentary life has gradually vanished.
On the other hand, the most prominent prerequisite for each person to become better is their self-cognition. In more specific, people with conservative attitude still can be on their own way and absolutely neglect the government’s efforts. Taking the mentioned campaigns for example, there still exists many customers who eat the harmful food regardless of its high price and detrimental consequences. Or the vast majority of people have inclined to navigate the Internet on cell phone in lieu of using stationery bike or treadmill provided.
In conclusion, I firmly believe that better lifestyle of citizens requires a strict cooperation between governments and themselves.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, if, so, still, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1518.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10453467321 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.672727272727 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6671456724 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.769230769 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1538461538 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7692307692 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180815743468 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0568767143273 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450723796004 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105503674943 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0587819712966 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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