some people think that everyone has the right to have access to university education, and that government should make it free for all students no matter what financial background they have. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.
Education plays an important role in improving human resources of the countries, which some people believe should be accessible and available for every student, regardless of their financial statements. In my perspective, I strongly agree with this idea for several reasons, described in the following paragraphs.
the first reason that authorities should advocate financial support to all students is to reduce social disparity. To reduce the gap between rich and poor people, education is a promising method that all developed countries implement. For example, the government of the Netherland provide scholarship to students who study at the kindergarten level until the university level. Consequently, according to the BBC news, Netherland is ranked in the top 5 countries that people have good liveliness in 2020, which the average individual income is high. Therefore, providing the opportunity for education can improve the well-being of the population.
Moreover, the nation will definitely get the benefit from investing in schooling, as the country will have experts in several particular fields of study to help the government better the nation. For instance, during Covid -19 pandemic, the countries that are pioneers in producing the vaccine against the virus, are the countries, which prioritize medical researches, and many innovations to overcome the pandemic are invented by students in universities. As a result, the nation will get advantages due to its fast recovery.
In conclusion, I absolutely admit that the government should support the finance for education to all students because its consequences will provide several benefits to the nation including the reduction in human disparity, and an increase in experts to help develop the country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, moreover, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1509.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.60966542751 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03150221277 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583643122677 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.9912899441 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.181818182 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4545454545 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.54545454545 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212680386841 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0751117988673 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0415938719566 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128100516696 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.053732729366 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.99 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.