Some think that climate change reforms will negatively affect business. Other feel they are an opportunity for business. Discuss both views and give your own opinion
It is true that the effects of new law on climate change on businesses has been a topic of debate. While there are several reasons to support the negative side, I am of the option that these changes could be beneficial to firm to some extent.
On the one hand, the fact that reforms on climate change would do more harm than good to businesses in reasonable to a certain extent. Firstly, to comply with new regulations, business might have to pay more carbon taxes, or invest in low-carbon production lines or green technologies. Thus, they would see a surge in their operational and investment cost. Another disadvantages is that law to accelerate the transition towards a low-carbon economy can cause a ripple effect on the economy. As traditional firm has to allocate their money to follow the eco-friendly economy trend, however, it would also incur in higher cost so the return on investment might decline, which may prevent them from repaying the debt to the banks.
Nevertheless, for several reasons I assert a belief that those reforms can provide businesses with better condition to develop. This would likely be a good chance for eco-friendly firms to gain benefits from their investment in green technologies. This can be perfectly exemplified in case of Tesla, which became the most valuable car maker in the world. On top of that, this also is an opportunity for carbon-intensive company to reshape their business model. As such, they will turn to invest more sustainably, which prevent them form climate change-related risks in the future.
In conclusion, although measures to mitigate climate change can negatively impact on business, I content that they are more beneficial to them and society in the long run. I predict that business will be likely to find a model to adapt with new regulations and orient themselves towards sustainable investment soon.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: You should probably use: 'are'.
Suggestion: are
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, thus, while, as to, in conclusion, it is true, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1569.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04501607717 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89582643367 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553054662379 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.486596244 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.071428571 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2142857143 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205771860928 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0753625489373 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0554357174602 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137204806657 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.033783628014 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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