There are some who believe that, acquring university degree is the ideal path for the job security. While others, uphold the idea of practical experience is the better option to get a good job rather than university education.
On the one hand, those who support the idea of work experience for guaranteeing job have their own reasoning. They believe that, tertiary level education follows outdated syllabus which designed several years back. Thus, students do not get information about the actual knowledge which are used in the companies precently. If people directly enter into the job, it would help the people to get a chance to work in current technologies which leads to people become experts in their field within short time. As a result, this experience gives acqires them effectively to step into job.
On the other hand, it is fairly easy to understand the numerous benefits of university degree. The primary one is that, tertiary level education gives basic foundation to students about the course. Basic information helps the people to understand the subject deeply which would be a great support to their future work environment. Hence they can solve the problems effectively which brings work safety. Moreover, students get vast knowledge in different areas. For instance, IT field has many subdivisions such as network, database, software development, web designing and many other. The university education covers all the areas which leads to get awareness in different areas. As a result, people could be choose the best option according to their interest and become expert in that field which in turn bring job security.
To sum up, eventhough work expereience has some advantages, my strong belief is that university degree offers far more merits and it is advisable.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...is the ideal path for the job security. While others uphold the idea of practical exp...
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...perts in their field within short time. As a result this experience gives adequate...
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Suggestion: Hence,
...pport to their future work environment. Hence they can solve the problems effectively...
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Message: Did you mean 'fields'?
Suggestion: fields
...ge in different areas. For instance, IT field has many subdivisions such as network, ...
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Suggestion: many others
...software development, web designing and many other. The university education covers all th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, moreover, so, thus, while, for instance, in short, such as, as a result, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1480.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15679442509 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66817975179 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554006968641 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.0719301581 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9375 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303063111642 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0930489798777 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0580974689408 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188489122525 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0678720494549 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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