A healthy diet is the solution to many of our health-care problems. From last few decades in our life, we have significant changes regarding food quality and food preference. Although, it is reasonable to say that government could play an important role to insure the quality of food products but at the same time, it is responsibility of every individual to be more cautious and aware regarding their food preferences.
On one hand, nevertheless, it is not pointless to say that our society is vitally depend on government authority for the authenticity of every food products, still some times government could not act needful. First of all, health department of government body should pass laws regarding to the healthy food products. These days manufacturers of many food products ignore the basic health hazards while producing their products. They are only considering it as a profitable business. However the totally ignore the fact that they are playing with the life of consumers. In this case government department can play an important role by passing the laws regarding those poisonous, edible products.
On the other hand, in my opinion, an individual is more responsible for their health. It is solely their decision whether to use healthy food or junk food or processed food. From health aspects everyone has right to choose their food. However, it is more beneficiary if one could choose organic fruits and vegetable over processed or tinned food. From health prospective , food which are grown organically, contains less chances or zero chances of having cancer or other kind of akin diseases.
On the whole, when it comes to the health issues it is responsibility of every individual and government body too. With the help of education and authority, we could get a healthy nation or world.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 171, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... regarding food quality and preference. Although, it is reasonable to say that governmen...
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Line 3, column 83, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'depended'.
Suggestion: depended
...less to say that our society is vitally depend on government authority for the authent...
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Line 3, column 433, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...onsidering it as a profitable business. However the totally ignore the fact that they a...
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Line 5, column 371, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... or tinned food. From health prospective , food which are grown organically, conta...
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Line 5, column 417, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun chances is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...d which are grown organically, contains less chances or zero chances of having cance...
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Line 7, column 142, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ent body too. With the help of education and authority, we could get a healthy na...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, nevertheless, regarding, so, then, while, kind of, first of all, in my opinion, on the whole, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1471.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12543554007 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89620592794 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536585365854 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.6069797102 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.5294117647 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8823529412 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.70588235294 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0957364675065 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0352896011134 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0292097834105 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0658366890273 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0086572177548 0.056905535591 15% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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