Some people think that the government should be responsible for crime prevention, while others believe that it is the responsibility of the individual to protect themselves. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
A group of people believe that crime prevention is a soul responsibility of government and another set of persons think that it is an individual's responsibility to stay safe and prevent crime. This essay will discuss both given notions along with my opinion in following paragraphs.
To commence with, government significantly plays a crucial role in preventing crime there are strict rules for citizens to follow which will help them to feel secure in this era of enhancing crime. Various government should introduce new ideas where from smart phones awareness should be spread inbetween individuals. They can use those applications to track criminals, their mobile phones and other gadgets. The helpline numbers provided by the government of country can help the person who is in any kind of dangerous situations. For example, a set punishment like death penality to the criminals, life imprisonment and many others. So people may feel safe and protected in world increasing crime rate.
On the other hand, individuals responsibility is to make sure that crime is very important issue to world. It is in a person's hand to obey the rules and regulations made by government. To reduce theft in a specific area like a shop or a house, an owner and his family members should be concerned with safety and should try to avoid unwanted happening. For example, people should fix alarms in their stores and the complex locking system should be there at their homes and work stations.
To conclude, I believe that individual play very important role to decrease crime rate by following the rules of government. But taking all precautions are very important to be sure there is no tragedies.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 135, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...ther set of persons think that it is an individuals responsibility to stay safe and prevent...
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Line 7, column 183, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[4]
Message: Did you mean 'there are no tragedies'?
Suggestion: there are no tragedies
...ecautions are very important to be sure there is no tragedies.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, for example, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1413.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06451612903 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87235679819 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587813620072 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5907637136 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.928571429 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9285714286 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07142857143 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.342335779869 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0979140597227 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0877681436685 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200467319641 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0992359178787 0.056905535591 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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