Some people think that the government should invest more money in teaching science than other subjects to make progress. To what extent do u agree or disagree ?
In contemporary settings, technology plays an essential role on daily basis and science is the major foundation of this. Therefore, according to some people, legal authorities should invest funds in schooling to teach science at higher proportion rather than other subjects. I agree with the statement and I also shed some light on opposition criteria too, in the upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, science plays a pivotal role on daily basis because, in modern era, life is mostly depend on scientific trends in every sector such as medical, industrial, electronic and so on. These are trends are part of science which are classified into biology, chemistry, physics and so on subjects. Due to this reason, some people and I personally believe that, government should invest money in science sector to teach knowledgeable criterias to students. Moreover, science also plays essential role in our healthy and hygienic lifestyle. Because, for instance, at present time, pandemic is going on and COVID-19 become hot topic. In this way, scientists prepare vaccine against corona virus to protect the public from further contact. As a result, science become part of protection from hilarious situation.
On the other hand, other subjects also equally important as science. Because, there are some subjects which are related to the culture, diversity and other things of every country. Therefore, students should learn these subjects to. Because, by this way, they become attach to their culture and historical events and so on of their nation.
To recapitulate, although science is essential in present duration because life is mostly depend on that. Yet, other subjects are also necessary for students to learn because this increases their knowledge in another way.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: depended
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'depended'.
Suggestion: depended
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, therefore, as to, for instance, such as, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1492.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36690647482 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68905042434 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561151079137 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.2853376095 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.25 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.375 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.875 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22771718933 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0726822687466 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.075451697843 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135934887273 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0456224099574 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.57 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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