Some people think that the government should spend more money on public service rather than wasting money on arts. To what extent do you agree.
The prompt states the government should spend more money on public service instead of prodigal expenditure on arts. I mostly agree with the statement for two reasons. However, I do concede that a certain amount of money should be used for encouraging art and its presence.
First of all, a country’s government should have a main motive of making their citizens satisfied with the facilities that they provide. So, improving the spending on public services can benefit a number of people which makes their life easier. For instance, government spending on public transportation (metros, railways and buses) and consistent efforts to make it more viable option for the citizens, would make it a go to option for the people commuting daily. In case of healthcare, which is crucial factor determining the survival of human being, the increased spending by the government will certainly attenuate the extravagant cost of necessary services required for a patient while being in a private hospital. The public hospital, then, would become cost effective for the majority of middle class people with the help of government employed staffs.
In addition, public services are known for their ubiquitous presence in every corner of the country. This factor plays an important role in improving the way of living of the peoplecoming in the middle class and the below. Furthermore, these services can also help tourists, who are often clueless about the necessary services that they need. For example, a tourist from a western country visits and asian country and don’t know where to locate the bank in order to survive during the trip, public consultation offices can resolve this probem. Another instance is when a foreigner, who want to find a cheap lodge, can be benefited with the government affiliated hotels/lodges. And there are many instances where public services can play a major role.
On the other hand, I do consider that the government should also have a constrained budget on art. A country’s culture as well as its art depicts it’s presence in front the world. Art has been considered a depraved field since many years. This inturn affected many artist’s motivation to create more. At present, art is influenced by the western paintings and majority of the people consider this to be a sole form of art. However, there are many cultural art forms specific to every country which are not so discoverable. So I believe, government should have a certain budge on encouraging and funding of the suitable art forms which can make an impact in the world.
In conclusion, I agree with the prompt for the aforementioned benefits that the public service, when increased and improved, caters to the citizens as well as tourists. However, government should also spend some amount on art
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... presence. First of all, a country’s government should have a main motive of ...
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Message: Did you mean 'its' (possessive pronoun) instead of 'it's' (short form of 'it is')?
Suggestion: its
...ry’s culture as well as its art depicts it’s presence in front the world. Art has be...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, so, then, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2345.0 1615.20841683 145% => OK
No of words: 459.0 315.596192385 145% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10893246187 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62863751936 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76366443264 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.496732026144 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 722.7 506.74238477 143% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7159330005 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.956521739 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9565217391 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.95652173913 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279316533892 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0868337357876 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0726033840309 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177033119309 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.07772824807 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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