some people think that it is best to live in a horizontal city, while others think of a vertical city, discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some people believe that horizontal cities are the best place to live, while the opponents of this idea prefer to settle in vertical ones. While living in a horizontal city could be beneficial to some extent, I would argue that it is better to dwell in high-rise buildings.
On the one hand, there are several reasons why people should live in horizontal cities consisting of low-rise buildings. First, living lower to the ground is safer since people could escape out of their houses faster in emergency situations such as fire or earthquake. Conversely, to get out of a tall building is not an easy task as there are hundreds of people who have to escape through just few emergency exits. Second, houses in horizontal cities often include certain outdoor areas such as gardens or mini football grounds. These open spaces definitely encourage citizens to exercise and get rid of sedentary lifestyles.
On the other hand, I believe that living in vertical cities could be the best choice in modern life. One reason is that tall buildings do not occupy much land, which makes the price for accommodation more affordable, especially in city centers which usually suffer from a shortage of land for building residential areas. As a result, these buildings provide reasonably priced accommodation for many people who cannot make a lucrative income to own a detached house. Additionally, it is way more convenient for residents to live in a tall building which offers a broad spectrum of goods and services, thanks to shopping malls and service centers on lower floors.
In conclusion, although living in a horizontal city could lead to some advantages, it seems to me that living in a vertical one is a better option.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, first, if, second, so, well, while, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1435.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98263888889 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71824885405 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559027777778 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.2672300537 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.583333333 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173347114654 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0748467787694 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0697818110007 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129537559153 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0645163544595 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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