Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
The idea of some part of the society is to educate young children separately in schools depending on their gender. But the other part of the society has the opposite view of this opinion. However, I agreed with the statement that young students should educate in a mixed school rather than sending them into two separate schools.
If you consider, having separate education centers for girls and boys there are some advantages such as streamlining the school curriculum system entirely based on gender. The school can focus on subjects which will be more useful for the girls such as aesthetic, science and ladies sports while boys schools can be more focused on engineering subjects and sports for boys. In Sri Lanka, we could vigorously see this separation since the curriculum system has been taken into consideration as girls’ colleges and boys’ colleges, also there is a clear difference of subject areas that are been taught in those schools.
However, I enormously believe that the concept of having mixed schools is better because it is not recommended to teach the subjects on a gender basis. Besides, separating the students at a too young age may lessen the opportunities to get to know better each other and how differs their behaviors. As a result, when they grow they do not feel comfortable dealing with each other and it starts to see them as strangers which can potentially turn down the well-being of society. Therefore, the most developed countries do not follow this separation of the schools and the majority of the schools are established as mixed ones.
Hence, in the inclusion, I would state both educational patterns have their own pros and cons. However, in my perception, I would prefer to have mixed schools since it is so vital to have a balanced society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, while, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1496.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95364238411 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66057902713 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55298013245 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.0479068169 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.666666667 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1666666667 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279629712496 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102192843015 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05073420045 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153162358484 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0502277608909 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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