Some people think it is a good idea of all employees to wear a uniform at work To what extent do you agree or disagree

Essay topics:

Some people think it is a good idea of all employees to wear a uniform at work. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In contemporary era, dress code is essential part of employment and indicates the sign of employer's work. Thus, few individuals support that this is a excellent thought to wear same outfit as per work of the staff. I support to this to a large extent for some reasons. My view is explained in detail in the ensuing paragraph.

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Average: 5.6 (2 votes)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 100, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ment and indicates the sign of employers work. Thus, few individuals support that...
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Line 1, column 151, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...s, few individuals support that this is a excellent thought to wear same outfit a...
^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, thus

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 41.998997996 21% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 268.0 1615.20841683 17% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 58.0 315.596192385 18% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62068965517 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 2.75966902107 4.20363070211 66% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78436265354 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 45.0 176.041082164 26% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.775862068966 0.561755894193 138% => OK
syllable_count: 81.9 506.74238477 16% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.2809341539 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 67.0 106.682146367 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 7.06120827912 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101314206762 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0528568430102 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0388702816366 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101314206762 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 13.0946893788 58% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 50.2224549098 148% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.92 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 15.0 78.4519038076 19% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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