Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams, like football. Other people think that taking part in individual sports like tennis or swimming is better. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
People have different views about what kind of sports would be most beneficial to play. While many argue that individual sports are far more outweighed by team sports, I believe that both kinds of sports have an equally important role to play in human development.
There are obvious advantages that team sports bring to each member. Firstly, due to its nature and characteristics, team sports give players opportunities to develop skills for working in a team. Indeed, to defeat any certain opponent, sports players must work together and all personal interests are sacrificed for the sake of achieving a more important team goal. Secondly, through regular interaction and conversation with other team’s members, individuals can hone their social and communication skills which will largely benefit them when they enter into the working environment later in their life. Also, more importantly, these social interactions are needed to reduce stress and the possibility of developing depression among those leading a busy life in particular.
Many people, however, opt for participating in individual sports due to a greater sense of personal achievement it could offer. It is true that being recognized by others is one of the wonderful and fascinating achievements that humans have longed for and this could be gained through playing individual sports. Sports like tennis or swimming give individuals a chance to exhibit their talents as well as becoming a credit for their schools and family when achieving a gold medal or establishing a new world record. Furthermore, playing sport individually also allows people to develop good traits and characteristics. For example, through practicing basketball, players can learn the values of focusing and concentration on a particular goal if they wish to reach it in their lives.
In conclusion, sports at all have a positive impact on human physical and mental development. People should be encouraged to do any kind of sports as long as it suits their causes and their physical conditions.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...causes and their physical conditions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, in particular, kind of, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1727.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34674922601 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00762162584 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613003095975 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.0883540571 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.357142857 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0714285714 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2142857143 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20791302504 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0788150807965 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052805094709 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13432813226 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.050383201515 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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