Some people think that it is more beneficial to take
part in sports which are played in teams, like football,
while other people think that taking part in individual
sports, like tennis or swimming, is better. Discuss both
views and give your own opinion.
Some people argue that playing team sports provides more benefits as opposed to taking part in individual sports. Personally, I believe that both types of sport can provide a range of benefits to people, and it depends on the achievement of each individual playing sports.
On the one hand, team sports, such as football or basketball, provide various benefits to those who play .For instance, they give the players opportunities to develop interpersonal skills, like teamwork and communication skills. It will not only support people in their day-by-day social interactions but also benefit them in their workplaces. In addiction, team sports also offer the players a chance to enhance sense of unity, friendship and sportsmanship between teammates, which can really add value to people’s lives by making them feel a part of something
On the other hand, individual sports, like tennis and swimming, also bring number of advantages. When some people plays individual sports, they have opportunities to enhance their personal skills, such as being able to manage emotions, cope with stress and build confidence and self-esteem. Furthermore, when people are playing an individual sports, they usually have nobody else to rely on for support during the match. Therefore, it is important for them to develop a strong mindset to be able to overcome any setbacks they may face. Individual sports also provide people better opportunities to challenge themselves by setting goals and achieving personal best.
In conclusion, both two types offer great benefits for people’s physical and mental health, and that people should choose whatever sport they are most interested in playing.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, may, really, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1433.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44866920152 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89175934616 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585551330798 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.3388506369 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.3 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202490985706 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0880029061304 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.061205195298 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126882509415 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0226659078854 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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