Some people think it is more important to spend money on roads and motorways than on public transport systems. To what extend do you agree?
It is argued that the government should pour money on developing roads and motorways rather than into public transport systems. In my view, I think both roads and public transport systems play a vital role in modern society, and thus, they should be received equal amounts of investment.
On the one hand, better quality roads offer great benefits increasing the level of safety and traffic jams. In many cities and provinces in VietNam reported that the number of road accidents is ever climbing due to the condition of road's surface. This is evidence that the government should expenditure money on improving the quality of road systems in order to ensure the safety of people. Additionally, construction wider road and more motorways contribute to reducing traffic congestion in cities with large populations, such as Ho Chi Minh city, where traffic obstruction is still a major problem, will help to raise the space for a larger number of vehicles, hence lessening pressure on the city's main roads.
On the other hand, nowadays, environmental pollution more and more is an urgent matter. More countries in the world are applying many methods to protect the atmosphere and one of them is to encourage people to use public transport systems instead of private vehicles. Improving the bus, train, and underground systems not only decrease the amount of carbon emission but also beneficial for those who do not have their own vehicles, such as a motorbike or car, buses and subway are a great choice if they have to commute daily.
In conclusion, for the reasons above, governments should pay attention to both improving roads and motorways and public transport systems due to their equally critical importance.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, still, thus, i think, in conclusion, such as, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1440.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12455516014 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69909529968 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5871886121 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.5210337599 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.0 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272703415103 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107858869636 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0613070490096 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166701213365 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0518357048411 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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