It is difficult for people in the cities to get enough physical exercise. What are the causes and solutions?
In modern life today, maintaining physical fitness and overall well-being has become a great challenge for everyone, especially for city dwellers. I think the lack of physical practice stems from two main reasons, which are the shortage of time and the development of science and technology, many modern public facilities were born.
The fact that people in urban areas have difficulties having enough workouts seem to be reasonable. First, a large proportion of the city population devoted most of their time for work, family and friends and that reduce their time fund and energy to exercise. In addition, the sedentary life is prefered by many young people nowadays is another contributor to this issue. Since most teenagers and young adults are used to spending most of their time to sit in front of TV screens, playing video games or surfing social network sites, physically exhausting activities seem unnecessary and unappealing.
However, governments and individuals can take some workable measures to overcome those difficulties. For the government, they can apply a new law that shortens the average working hours. If workers are allowed to leave work early, they will be able to spend time pursuing healthy activities and habits. Secondly, more financial resources should be allocated to educating city residents, especially the young generations, about the importance of physical exercise. An online propagation campaign about potential health risks of sedentary behaviours on popular websites such as Facebook and Twitter, for example, will serve as a warning for people who do not frequently exercise and encourage a healthier lifestyle.
In conclusion, citizens of many big cities, although fully aware of the vital role of physical exercise, still confront difficulties in making it a habit, and two main solutions including reducing working hours and enhancing people's awareness can help tackle this problem.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, well, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1635.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46822742475 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84093583748 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.66220735786 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.051135617 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.25 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9166666667 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.75 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203422518459 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0636771253864 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455010463273 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112073731795 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0167194206423 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.42 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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