Some people think that it would be better for large companies and industries to move to regional areas outside large urban centres. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
It is often believed that displacing large-scale industries to areas away from urban locations have some benefits. I think this can bring about more advantages to the city residents than any disadvantages it might have.
Despite that minor issues below, there are several benefits to consider moving big companies to regional locations. Firstly, the traffic congestion and population of cities will reduce drastically. Workers will leave away from the city each day to work and sometimes may relocate permanently near to their workplace. This, in turn, reduces the city’s population. Secondly, the reduced traffic congestion will lead to a reduction in pollution since lesser cars on the roads mean lesser emissions. For example, a recent study found that when the companies in Kyoto's heart relocated to the nearby rural areas, the city’s traffic congestion, as well as pollution, decreased tremendously.
Admittedly, there are some basic issues when big industries move out of cities. One main problem is workers who, mostly, live within the city limits will have to travel for long distances to work. This can also negatively impacts the workers’ life, as they will need to spend more money on travel than they usually do. Another reason is the difficulty faced by these companies to transport their goods to the cities’ markets, an aspect in which they never spent a penny while being inside urban locations. For instance, the turn over of industries that were once inside Kyoto hugely affected by the new costs due to the finished goods’ transportation.
In conclusion, reduction in traffic congestion, population and pollution far outweigh any drawbacks that could result from displacing big industries to rural places from cities.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1504.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44927536232 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85174850648 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630434782609 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2591731213 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.428571429 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7142857143 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07142857143 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165761752446 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0531309565078 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529510922277 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103212219713 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0718829532887 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.