Some people think that it would be better for large companies and industry to move to regional areas outside large urban centers. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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...mployed due to lack of industries in it.When big firms will established in rural are...
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...yment opportunities will ultimately rise in regional areas.Moreover, another bene...
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...ill ultimately rise in regional areas.Moreover, another benefit may be expansion of in...
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...ese industries will setup in rural areas ,they would expand the size of its firms ...
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...and the size of its firms and factories.Meanwhile,the upsurge in production will lead to ...
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...On the contrary,if there is a light then,there is dark also.Relocation also includes n...
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...one of the con of moving to rural areas.When factories have moved to rural areas,the...
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...rural areas,they need of land to expand.As a result ,they will cut the trees for s...
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...y providing subsidies to some companies.This will lead to development of rural areas...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, may, moreover, nonetheless, so, then, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, as a result, as well as, on the contrary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1840.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.71428571429 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.7912442546 2.80592935109 135% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583850931677 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 575.1 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 53.0 20.2975951904 261% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 280.890646971 49.4020404114 569% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 306.666666667 106.682146367 287% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 53.6666666667 20.7667163134 258% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 26.6666666667 7.06120827912 378% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 38.0 5.01903807615 757% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13202354772 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0683634742696 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.037594504011 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.082243528821 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.030007831446 0.056905535591 53% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 32.3 13.0946893788 247% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 0.76 50.2224549098 2% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 26.3 11.3001002004 233% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.73 12.4159519038 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.46 8.58950901804 133% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 23.2 10.1190380762 229% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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