Some people think that it would be better for large companies and industry to move to regional areas outside large urban centers. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
It is true that large corporations and industry should be moved to rural regions which are far from city centers. While there are several disadvantages to the companies, I believe that the benefits are more significant.
Admittedly, being moved to remote areas is disadvantages for the business in some certain respects. Primarily, logistics, which plays a pivotal role in the transporting procedure of the enterprises, would be a tremendous task due to the geographic distance. Take a company producing dried fruits for example. There is a likelihood that transport fee would become a burden for the budget of the company because a considerable food mile is required to transfer the fruits from remote provinces to the factories. In addition, it would be inconvenience for employees to travel to a distant place. This could lead to the increase in their expense for transportation to get to work, hence their lower work engagement.
Despite negative impacts mentioned above, I would agree that they are outweighed by the potential advantages. Initially, the absence of a considerable number of corporations may solve the environmental issue as a whole. Less exhaust fumes from factories might alleviate the pollution problem that has already put cities under strain. More importantly, a reasonable distribution of company in different areas exerts a profound impact on the overpopulation in some big cities. It stands to reason that workers might move their accommodation if their company are changed to another place.
In conclusion, it seems to me that the positive effects of moving big corporations and industry out of large cities are greater than the possible problems.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, may, so, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1420.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33834586466 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13669035598 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601503759398 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.6610408831 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.428571429 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92857142857 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259770683541 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0803359632592 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0663689953302 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143936872893 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0466123594097 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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