Some people think that job satisfaction is more important while other people think that a stable job is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
The 21st century witnessed the rise in job opportunity in a new level that has never seen before. This move raised a critical concern that whether people should choose to chase a career that deserves them to dedicate their youth or to seek a career that ensures them the long-term stability. In the sphere of this essay, I will discuss both pros and cons of these views mentioned above.
On the one hand, due to its stability, a secure job is an option few argue with, especially the middle-age workforce. Equally certain is the fact that the generation Y - the Millennials, is considered the thrill seekers who tend to pursue creative jobs instead of dedicating their life for the ordinary office jobs that could ensure their income in the future. As values of life change by generations, those who were born in the times of 1990's prioritize to live their own life, to taste experiences to the utmost, to reach out eagerly and without fear for newer and richer experience. Furthermore, the factors of rich experience, ability to persevere under pressure, and patience are the remarkable advantages to make middle-aged candidates the appropriate choice for some certain fields rather than the youth. In terms of higher-class education or high-qualified health care, for instance, the middle-aged workforce, or even the elders, are still playing an irreplaceable role in both areas of expertise and ability of conveying experience. It seems to be the one of the main reasons for the difference in career orient among generations that makes the youth to not be enthusiastic about the steady jobs.
On another hand, young generation is attracted by challenging jobs because they all long for learning and tasting precious experiences. Motivated by the motto "memento mori - remember that you will die", the young workforce usually opt to seek their dream jobs as well as to dedicate their youth for their visions. Despite the fact that these kinds of decision could be sometimes a tremendous risk gamble, they do believe that failure is a precious opportunity to grow up, or a stepping stone to pave the way for success. Obviously, to earn a steady job in the times of middle age, overcoming the struggle in career at starting point is the most necessary requirement. As a result, a huge number of innovations in many fields of life motivated by the unbound creations of young workforce did have contributed to change mindset on global scale.
In conclusion, although seeking a secure job brings numerous interests for one's future, humans can only attach with their jobs in the whole life once they deeply treasure what they are doing. I do believe that job satisfaction is the most remarkable factor one should consider before dedicate life for a certain career.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, so, still, thus, well, as to, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 67.0 41.998997996 160% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2328.0 1615.20841683 144% => OK
No of words: 462.0 315.596192385 146% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03896103896 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63618218583 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80910169248 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 263.0 176.041082164 149% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569264069264 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 729.0 506.74238477 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.6904701197 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.5 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.875 20.7667163134 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109567723777 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0393772543254 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.029447363704 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0763230820503 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0234396161467 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 78.4519038076 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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