Some people think that keeping pets is good for children while other think that it is dangerous and unhealthy. Which opinion do you agree with discuss both view and give your opinion.
Nowadays, most of the parents who like to keep animals at home for own their adults because it advantages more to reduce the isolation and loneliness. While, few individual feel that having a pet increase more horrible aliments and allergies. I strongly agree with the idea that keeping pet at home children become more caring and funny, I believe that it just waste of time and money.
On one side of the argument there are people who argue that the benefits of keeping pets for children considerably outweigh it's disadvantages. Firstly, there is no doubt that majority of people in society who feel that animals such as dog abd cat just like our family members. Moreover, they also take responsibility to care the animals like our adults. Animals play an important role in human life and encourage more to children for brisk walking in daily routine for this reason adults feel always energetic and reduce to stress and anxiety. To illustrate, in contemporary era printing a lot of articles about animals that they caught the burglars at night and protect the family members life. As far as I am concerned that animals like best friend or buddy.
On the other hand it is possible to make the opposing case. It is often argued that the infect of there are number of dangerous diseases born through keeping animals at home which is more concerning issue for children. For instance, sometimes having a pet can be very messy and if you are one of those cleanliness freaks then you always ways have to be on your toes to watch for all the clutter and filth your pet is creating around the house.
In conclusion, I believe that if they not trained properly or during sickness they can urinate, vomit and poop inside your home that you will have to clean up every time than no extra time for own adults.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 488, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put before the verb 'feel'.
Suggestion: always feel
...in daily routine for this reason adults feel always energetic and reduce to stress and anxi...
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Line 3, column 84, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... opposing case. It is often argued that the infect of there are number of dangerous diseas...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, then, while, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1484.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66666666667 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44341848577 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569182389937 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.2942819106 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.153846154 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4615384615 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07692307692 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177670797612 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0612289762089 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0498406240514 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108883699254 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0509373601604 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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