Some people think that most jobs require Academic Degrees so University Education is basic and given to every student while others believe that it is a waste of both time and money if all students have to study in universities or college after high school. Which opinion do you agree with and why? Include specific details and examples to support your choice.
People have different views about tertiary education. Some consider that academic degrees are required in most professions so every pupil should get this kind of qualification. While others opine that if all youngsters have to go to universities or colleges, they will fritter their time and money away. I agree with both of these opinions.
Firstly, academic qualifications are essential in some professions. For instance, it is impossible to become a doctor, a teacher, or a lawyer without relevant degrees. Furthermore, youngsters having higher education will have more choices to good jobs. Most employers are impressed by applicants who finished university or college courses than by one who has only high school qualifications because it proves candidates’ intelligence and self-discipline that is needed for three or four-year courses. Moreover, the jobs market is increasingly competitive, so youngsters who do not have high education will not be able to compete while there are hundreds of applicants for one position in a company.
In contrast, not every pupil has enough ability to afford and finish a university or college course. It is undeniable that higher education is expensive, and a lot of students have had taken out loans to pay for it. If they can not find jobs after finishing school immediately, or that job does not pay as well as they hope, it is impossible to pay back the loans with interest. Additionally, some youths are not prepared academically. A lot of students find it difficult to understand various subjects, and if they attend college education, they may have to face the fact that they will fail multiple classes. So they should decide to go in for some vocational training.
In conclusion, entering a university or college is not a good decision for all pupils while there are both advantages and drawbacks of tertiary education and a variety of choices to find a good job via attending vocational schools.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1642.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16352201258 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07426890603 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540880503145 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 529.2 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.1603861214 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.625 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.875 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.875 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.337514967803 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0945066739159 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527634914917 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198038150611 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0600285212753 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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