Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
In this modern era, many people consider that technological advancement provides us with an overwhelming number of choices in various fields in daily life, such as education, food,...etc. I completely agree with this view, and I think that the two majors which have the most significant contribution in the choice expansion are the development of the Internet and globalisation.
First of all, the Internet presents us with an exponentially increased number of available options. Numerous online media choices are now offered free, such as news, entertainment, or music streaming. For instance, in the past, especially when the Internet was not popular, there was a limited way to entertain, in fact, many people had a choice of just 2 radio channels or the 7 pm news, whereas we now have access to thousands of films or songs through services like Netflix or Apple Music. Furthermore, in the pandemic period, while people lessen the number of times going out for grocery shopping and due to school closure, the online shopping and education platforms endow citizens more utilities, so that reduce infection risk in the community.
Alongside the influence of the Internet, globalisation is making the world smaller and closer. Cheap international flights have made overseas travel possible for millions of people, but this also means that we are facing a world of options when deciding where to go on holiday or even where to live. We no longer have the limited but simple travel choices as those of our grandparents’ generation. It is the same if we look at the trend of an increasing number of students who decide to study abroad. While the opportunity for overseas study seems appealing, many students are confused about where to go and which path to take.
In conclusion, we are blessed with so many options to pick from in this modern era and the innovation of technology is increasing the list day by day. We should just be careful and prudent enough to choose the best for us in personal life and for the entire human race for our overall progress.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 180, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...s in daily life, such as education, food,...etc. I completely agree with this view...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, look, so, whereas, while, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in fact, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1721.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97398843931 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84865115304 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586705202312 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.2222586174 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.384615385 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6153846154 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.92307692308 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202060758863 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0693145089584 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0513160596058 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128040492337 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0488011464505 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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