In recent years, the museums and art exhibitions are becoming increasingly popular in developed and developing countries alike. Thus , the majority of people claim that native country’s history should be represented deeply and precisely instead of the foreign country’s history and art. However, i strongly agree that the musuems and art galleries should focus on as well as the alien country’s history , as it leads affirmative consequences.
To begin with, nowadays there are miniority of people interested in musuems, because in this areas the native history and art is represented , and the population of country have learnt them at schools or by help of their relatives. There is no additional and extraordinary history to develop their worldview. Therefore, members of museums and art galleries should concentrate on overseas’s history to improve people’s outlook , especially kids. Moreover , there are plethora of people who do not have adequate money to travel abroad for learning world’s history. As a result on muesums they should represent the other countries history.
From economically point of view, if the musuems or art galleries demonstrates the allien country’s culture , tourist will hit up the cpuntry, which will lead to have positive impact on economic incomes. Consequently, as the goverments income develop, they can meet their needs.
To recaputulate, i entirelly disagree that not merely museums should concentrate on their histories, they should also repsresent other countriy’s history to develop their countries elloboratly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, however, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1361.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 235.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.7914893617 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.30443676798 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.0667753366 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.727272727 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3636363636 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3636363636 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.356589345993 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139223092379 0.084324248473 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0670073416992 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220066895752 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0790634398972 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.3 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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